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(filhosmamente42 = tim
sic transit crit = me
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filhosdamente42: alright, we're gonna write a song...
filhosdamente42: one word at a time...
filhosdamente42: alternating between us
sic transit crit: oh good plan!
filhosdamente42: we end a line when something rhymes
filhosdamente42: i'll start
filhosdamente42: You
sic transit crit: haha what if nothing ever rhymes?
filhosdamente42: then it's a LOOOOOONG line
sic transit crit: ok. i must continue...
sic transit crit: You ate
filhosdamente42: you ate my
sic transit crit: you ate my face
filhosdamente42: ...on
sic transit crit: you ate my face on sunday
filhosdamente42: (comma) but
sic transit crit: then
filhosdamente42: I
sic transit crit: ate
filhosdamente42: three
sic transit crit: cupcakes
filhosdamente42: anyway!
filhosdamente42: [line two]
filhosdamente42: HAHAHAH!
filhosdamente42: best line ever
sic transit crit: (nice!)
sic transit crit: Dirty
filhosdamente42: pants
sic transit crit: and
filhosdamente42: rubber
sic transit crit: lamps
filhosdamente42: tossed
sic transit crit: my
filhosdamente42: noodle
sic transit crit: off
filhosdamente42: of
sic transit crit: a
filhosdamente42: postage
sic transit crit: stamp
filhosdamente42: (period)
filhosdamente42: are you getting all of this?
sic transit crit: hahahaha
filhosdamente42: *()
sic transit crit: oh yes i sure am.
filhosdamente42: nice
filhosdamente42: *()
filhosdamente42: Nice
sic transit crit: dirty pants and rubber lamps tossed my noodle off of a psotage stamp
filhosdamente42: ha
filhosdamente42: (new line) Angry
sic transit crit: dolphins
filhosdamente42: everywhere
sic transit crit: (period) angry
filhosdamente42: colonels
sic transit crit: being
filhosdamente42: angry
sic transit crit: colonels.
sic transit crit: - the .
filhosdamente42: (no, i think that's fine)
filhosdamente42: (third line): angry dolphins everywhere, angry colonels being angry colonels/.
filhosdamente42: haha
filhosdamente42: i like it
sic transit crit: haha
filhosdamente42: (new line) Oh
sic transit crit: damn
filhosdamente42: (comma) I
sic transit crit: threw
filhosdamente42: out
sic transit crit: my
sic transit crit: (say knee!)
filhosdamente42: knee
sic transit crit: when
filhosdamente42: you
sic transit crit: threw
filhosdamente42: it
sic transit crit: out
filhosdamente42: the
sic transit crit: instead of out, it should be "off" and then it can be..."threw it off the back of my mooooooped"
filhosdamente42: YES!
filhosdamente42: i like it
filhosdamente42: let it be done!
filhosdamente42: so, what do we have so far...
sic transit crit: oh damn, i threw out my knee when you threw it off the back of my moped.
filhosdamente42: that's good
filhosdamente42: what's the whole thing so far?
sic transit crit: umm hang on
sic transit crit: you ate my face on sunday, but i ate three cupcakes anyway!
dirty pants and rubber lamps tossed my noodle off of a psotage stamp
angry dolphins everywhere, angry colonels being angry colonels.
oh damn, i threw out my knee when you threw it off the back of my moped.
filhosdamente42: i think that's good enough
filhosdamente42: then we throw in some weird solos, and it's good to go
filhosdamente42: we need a title
sic transit crit: "no hollerin'"
filhosdamente42: excellent
sic transit crit: i'm so gonna post this whole writing session in the a.skunk community
filhosdamente42: nice

so here is the whole thing...
no hollerin'
you ate my face on sunday, but i ate three cupcakes anyway!
dirty pants and rubber lamps tossed my noodle off of a postage stamp.
angry dolphins everywhere, angry colonels being angry colonels.
oh damn, i threw out my knee when you threw it off the back of my moped.



is that rockin'? or no? comment!!!
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